大家都那麽熟了,我就不怕露怯了。哈哈。Jenna別介意我說錯的地方哈。
learning writing--practicing
in elementary schools--schools?你上了好幾個小學?
even on dinner tables --tables,我不確定要不要加s
and moving on to next one the next day.---moving on to the next in the following day.
With a “scientific” mind--不知道mind改成mindset(思維定式)是否更好。
for lacking of vocabularies-----lacking前麵加my或者·my limited English vocabulary; vocabularies雖然有複數形式,但我覺得這裏是個集合名詞,最好用單數,而且加上修飾English vocabulary。這個地方待其他牛人來講解。
that golden age for reading novels--裏的that我仍然覺得用the更好,跟前麵一段提到的讀小說時代離得有點遠,中間插了不少其他內容。
because I have so much of my own stories to struggle with。這裏如果用so much,後麵跟的stories是可數,但是so much又可以接to struggle with,所以我覺得有點別扭。
We women tend to focus on our own emotions, our own life stories----focus on our own emotions and life stories
every minor details of ---details是不是應該改單數?