3rd paragraph:
1. I already pass that golden age --> I am already beyond the golden age or I have already passed the golden age
2. I am not into other people’s stories that much as I was young --> I am not into other people’s stories that much as when I was young
4th paragraph:
1. tendency is considered as --> tendency is considered
2. the big picture about more importance aspects of life-->the big picture about more important aspects of life
3. like future of the world -->like the future of the world, etc
6th paragraph:
1. in a sunny Sunday morning-->on a sunny Sunday morning
2. every minor details-->every details
