A very nice translation!

1. Would "comparable to" sound better than "comparable with" (?)

2.  "the arteries and veins that transfer blood that carries oxygen and nutrition" - how about "the arteries and veins that transfer blood containing oxygen and nutrition"

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• Thanks！ -jennea- ♀ (664 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 20:52:22

• To my undersanding -EnLearner- ♀ (394 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 21:10:31

• In my piece above, i used comparable. Which one should i use? -Jennea- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 21:14:40

• In that case, I think "comparable with" should be used. -EnLearner- ♀ (114 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 21:21:47

• You are right! Both are grammatically correct. -NewVoice- ♀ (45 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 01:41:46