Motherhood beats all to hell

carpediem · 2011-08-07 20:19:30Z

Motherhood beats all to hell簡介

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回答: 【非文青每周一文】Marriage--歡迎拍磚由非文學青年於 2011-08-07 16:28:57

A 7000-squre-foot mansion is an illusion to a mom. Not to mention an old loner's confession which was full of self-pity.

The parallel sentences are very powerful, and the ending is perfect! I only found that two however's in the second paragraph don't sound very soothing:)

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• totally agree！我寫的時候也覺得那裏不順，DCH也提出這個問題，我需要再想想。 -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 23:28:35

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