Good rewriting~

來源: lilac09 2011-07-25 07:19:43 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀: 次 (579 bytes)
回答: 短句好,長的頭暈selfselfself2011-07-24 22:44:40

Even with her son kidnapped, she never gave up her hope and still mustered the guts to take on the whole corrupted LAPD, finally getting the truth surfaced.

Here, better to make "finally getting the truth surfaced" a subordinate clause here something like "which finally got..." since it's the main clause that leads to such an result. 

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