回複:回複:小測驗:我下麵這個帖子有三處不地道的地方(不是時態),大家來找,我晚上公布答案?

However, your grammatical mistake of using "many" in front of an uncountable noun, your wrong use of "promise to somebody" and your mistake in "I should have had spent " were not pointed out.

The sentence above is not good either. The however doesn't sound to follow the logic flow and if it does, it is not used in the right place.  The rest is confusing.  "and your mistake",better have a "," in front of and.

 

...class is becoming too much (of) a distraction for me

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