1.check with( chahcha說到了)
2.is buying 最好是 was buying(因為主句是過去)
3.It's just pure, wrong usage of "bitter" 沒懂這句話,因為沒看以前的comments
覺得是不是It's just A pure wrong usage of "bitter"好一點。(不確定)
lunchtime 看到你們討論,好喜歡。隻提3處:)
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tern2出手了,歡迎!
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06/22/2011 postreply
09:52:15
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至少, 你的pure和 wrong之間加comma不太好:))
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06/22/2011 postreply
10:00:52
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nice observation...
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06/22/2011 postreply
11:39:06
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提交早了。要說:還是你最牛,被公開表揚:)))
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06/22/2011 postreply
11:52:20
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真沒想到
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06/22/2011 postreply
12:24:35
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good
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06/22/2011 postreply
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