【翻譯寫作】練習之三原文+匯總

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大家都翻得不錯。沒總結,看到不順眼的還是標出來了。原文是新概念II, Lesson 80 The Crystal Palace

19世紀最不尋常的建築也許要數水晶宮了,它是為1851年的世界博覽會而建在海德公園的。這座水晶 宮不同於世界上所有的其他建築,因為它是用鋼和玻璃建成的。它是有史以來最高大的建築物之一,因此,人們從各個國家紛紛前來參觀。大量的商品從世界各地運 送到了博覽會,參展的還有很多機器,其中最奇妙的是內史密斯的蒸汽錘。盡管在當時旅行不像現在這麽容易,但汽船還是把成千上萬的參觀者從歐洲大陸送過了英 吉利海峽。一到英國,火車就把他們送到了水晶宮。參觀的人數總共是600萬。博覽會的贏利用來建造博物館和高等學校。後來,水晶宮被移到了倫敦南部。 1936年被焚毀之前,它一直是世界上最著名的建築物之一

Perhaps the most extraordinary building of the nineteenth century was the Crystal Palace, which was built in Hyde Park for the Great Exhibition of 1851. The Crystal Palace was different from all other buildings in the world, for it was made of iron and glass. It was one of the biggest buildings of all time and a lot of people from many countries came to see it. A great many goods were sent to the exhibition from various parts of the world. There was also a great deal of machinery on display. The most wonderful piece of machinery on show was Nasmyth's steam hammer. Though in those days, traveling was not as easy as it is today, steam boats carried thousands of visitors across the Channel from Europe. On arriving in England, they were taken to the Crystal Palace by train. There were six million visitors in all, and the profits from the exhibition were used to build museums and colleges. Later, the Crystal Palace was moved to South London. It remained one of the most famous buildings in the world until it was burnt down in 1936.

newton123

The Crystal Palace perhaps could be counted as the most unusual architecture built in 19th century. It was designed for the 1851 World Exposition and erected in the Hyde Park. Unlike any other buildings, it was made of steel and glass. It was the highest architecture ever built, thus attracted tourists from every corner of the world. A great number of products including many machines were sent to the expo. The steam hammer invented by Smith was the most wonderful among them. Although traveling in that time period was not as easy as it is today, thousands and hundreds visitors crossed the English Channel by steam vessels. They rode to the Crystal Palace by train upon landing. The toll of visitors reached six million. The profit from the expo was for building museums and colleges. The Crystal Palace was moved to the south of London thereafter. It had been the most famous building in the world before it was burnt in 1936.

非文學青年

The Crystal Palace, probably the most remarkable architecture of the 19th century, was built in Hyde Park for the World Exposition of 1851. Different from the rest of world architectures, it was made of steel and glass. Up to that time in history, it was one of the tallest buildings; therefore it attracted many people from different countries. Large number of merchandises(collective nounplural? OK here), as well as many machines, among which was the most marvelous steam hammer invented by Neil Smith, were transported to the exposition for display. Although travelling wasnt as easy as (it is加上好象好一些) nowadays, steam boats still managed to carry thousands of visitors across the English Strait (?) from the Continent. Upon arriving in England, the visitors were then sent to the crystal palace by train. The visitors totaled 6 million. The money earned(真土啊,當時想不起來profit這個詞,汗) from the exposition was used to build museums and advanced schools. Later moved to the south of London, the Crystal Palace had remained one of the most famous buildings of the world before it was burnt down in 1936.

美風

The most unusual building in the nineteenth century maybe be the Crystal Palace. It was built in Hyde Park for the World Exposition of 1951. The Crystal Palace differred from all of the other buildings in the world because it was built of steel and glass. Since it was one of the tallest building in the history, people from other countries came to visit it very often. A large amounts of merchants were shipped to the Expo from all over the world. There were also many machines in the exposition, one of the most mysterious was the steaming hammer by Smith. Even though the travel was not as easy as that of today, the steaming boat shipped thousands of visitors from Europe through the England Tunnel. Once to England, the visitors were sent to the Crystal Palace by the train. The total amounts of visitors were six millions. The profit from the Expo was for building museums or colleges. Later, the Crystal Palace was moved to the south of London. Before it was burned in 1936, it had always been one of the most famous buildings in the world.

學英語3151

The Crystal Palace, constructed in Hyde Park for the world exhibition of 1851, was probably the most unusual architecture of the nineteenth century. It was different from all the other structures of the world because it was made from iron and glass. Since it was one of the tallest buildings in the history, people around the world had come to visit. A huge amount of merchandises were shipped to the exhibition as well as a lot of machines, among those the Smith Steam hammer was the most peculiar. Even though travel back then was not as easy as nowadays, thousands of visitors from around Europe were still sent across English Channel by steam ship. As soon as they reached England, they were sent to the Crystal Palace by train. The total number of visitors reached 6 million. The profit from the exhibition was used to build museums and schools. Later, the Crystal Palace was moved to south of London. Before it was destroyed in the 1936 fire, the Crystal Palace had always been one of the most famous architectures in the world.

冰粒

The most unusual building in 19(th) Century might be the Cystal Place,It was built in Hyde Park for the Great Exhibition of 1851. Te Cystal Place was quite different from the others in the world,Because,It was built of steel and glass.It is one of the greatest building since the begining of history, therefore, people came and visited it from contries.Plenty (of) goods were sent to the Great Exhibition  from around the world,There were a lot of machines in the exhibition,the most amazing machine was the steam hammer from NeSmith. Although travelling was not as easy as today at that time,but thousands of visitors came across the English Channel from continent of Europe by ship,And then,they went straight to the Cystal Place by train as soon as they arrived (at) the U.k..The amount of visitors was 6 million.The profit from the great exhibition was used to build the museums and the dvanced school, Afterwards, the Cystal Place was moved to south of London.It was aways the one of the most famous building in the world before it was burned down in 1936.

DCH

Perhaps the most unusual building of the nineteenth century was The Crystal Palace, which was built in the Haide Park for the World Exposition in 1851.The Crystal Palace was different from all the other buildings in the world, because it was made of steel and glass. It was one of the tallest buildings by far and people from all over the world came to view it. A large number of goods were delivered to the Exihibition from many areas of the world. Also on display  was a great deal of machinery, among which  the most wonderful piece of work was NaySmith's Steam hammer. Even though travelling at the time was not as easy as it is now, steam boats carried thousands of visitors through (across) the English Channel from the continental shelf of Europe. Once arriving in England, they were brought to the Crystal Palace by train. The total number of visitors amounted to six millions and the profit from the exihibtion was used to build museums and universities. Later,"Crystal Palace" was moved to South London. Before burned down in 1936, it had been one of the most famous buildings in the world.

愚公

Crystal Palace was probably the most unique building in the 19th century.  It was built in Hyde Park for the 1850 World Exhibition.  This crytal palace was not the same as any other building in the world for it was built with steel and glass.  It was one of the tallest building in the history and  attracted people from various countries.  Great quantities of goods were transported to the exhibition.  The most amazing item participated in the exhibition was Smith's "Vapor Hammer".  Althoug travelling was not as easy as it's today, handreds of thousands of vistors were sent across the English channel from the Europen continent.  Once arrived in Britain, they were sent to the Crystal Palace by train.  The total number of visitors reached six millions.  The profits of the exhibition were used to build museumes and advanced education institutes.  Later on, the Crytal Palace was moved to the south of London.  It was the most well known building in the word until it was burned down in 1936.

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半年沒來。現在這裏高手如雲呀。 -falsetruth- 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 08:22:00

哪兒啊,真高手都不屑於跟我們玩 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (117 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 09:47:24

haha, 不敢,不敢。我以前還真在這裏請教一段文字的翻譯,可惜沒人理我,哈哈 -falsetruth- 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 10:10:36

恩,看到那個老不正經貼了,哈哈。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (100 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 10:20:31

ok,ok,哈 -falsetruth- 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 11:12:50

問候非文學青年,謝謝分享,周末快樂。 -珈玥- 給 珈玥 發送悄悄話 珈玥 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 08:28:19

珈玥周末愉快too! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 09:39:22

謝謝文青花費了大量時間為我們整理。 -bingli- 給 bingli 發送悄悄話 bingli 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 09:11:24

沒花啥時間,冰粒太客氣了,共同學習很充實! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 09:30:21

多謝菲教授,周末愉快! -EnLearner- 給 EnLearner 發送悄悄話 EnLearner 的博客首頁 (145 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 19:35:59

啥意思?我不是一上來就貼的中文+原文嗎?你沒看到? -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 21:15:03

奇怪?用火狐可看到帖子裏的所有文字,用IE隻看到最後部分。 -EnLearner- 給 EnLearner 發送悄悄話 EnLearner 的博客首頁 (164 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 21:31:31

怪死了,每次我編輯一下就出問題。我是用firefox的。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 21:45:03

謝謝文青! 我可以用Droid2看全文,但不能用IE看。你真的不用這麽做。太費時間和心血了! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (43 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 22:44:22

美風真好玩,上升到心地善良的高度了 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (87 bytes) () 06/10/2011 postreply 23:42:36

恩,明白了,變相誇自己,我是有語病也看不出來的。晚安! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (27 bytes) () 06/11/2011 postreply 00:03:09

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