謝謝!戴碧來信了,我的回信,請指正!

Dear Debi Vis:
This is picture :

1,my garge door is open , I am in home .
2, the car parking there ,no FL ,no block the RD
3, I stop he there ,becous he don't give back the car .and he ask $175.00 or $299.00 tomorrow .
   polici come he change to ask $87.00. 
we need short time parking right from my home .  
 xkk 


From: Deanza@WheelerSteffen.com
To: xkk

Subject: Receipt of letter
Date: Wed, 13 Oct 2010 11:57:49 -0700

Hi xkk,

 

I received your letter but it is in Chinese and I do not read, speak or write Chinese?  Please have the letter written in English and resubmit.

 

Thank you,

Debi Vis

Account Manager

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你中文怎麽寫的?英文要改改。 -我也有話說- 給 我也有話說 發送悄悄話 我也有話說 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 12:36:54

謝謝!我改了英文。 -xkk- 給 xkk 發送悄悄話 xkk 的博客首頁 (460 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 12:43:41

回複:謝謝!戴碧來信了,我的回信,請指正! -Comfort.- 給 Comfort. 發送悄悄話 Comfort. 的博客首頁 (18744 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 12:51:48

he asked $175.00 then or $299.00 the next day. -allmeteor- 給 allmeteor 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 12:59:25

很羞愧,謝謝修正!請喝茶. -xkk- 給 xkk 發送悄悄話 xkk 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 14:05:35

在那位朋友的基礎上稍作修改, 更加正式一點。 -mickey222- 給 mickey222 發送悄悄話 mickey222 的博客首頁 (1125 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 18:26:55

改得好多了;-)) -Comfort.- 給 Comfort. 發送悄悄話 Comfort. 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/14/2010 postreply 08:26:43

謝謝各位花費寶貴時間幫助!鞠躬。 -xkk- 給 xkk 發送悄悄話 xkk 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/14/2010 postreply 12:15:55

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