A great piece: well-written, an easy-read

來源: myp12345 於 2019-01-13 10:50:07 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (502 bytes)
回答: 讓我感動的同事 由 狗的哲學 於 2019-01-12 15:13:37

Precise punctuation and natural transition helped make this relatively lengthy piece flow well, and therefore, easy to read and follow.

One exception: The quotation marks were misplaced in the sentence below?

    他又一次讓我驚歎：“三百多頁的附件！”

And, one small suggestion: Adding a strategically placed blank line here and there may help further improve readability. 

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