help on writing: what you can bring this job?

I had an interview this morning, the director asked me to write what I can bring this job (PM) by email to her. 
That is part of writing skill test also. 

Thank you for interviewing me yesterday for the Clinical Project Manager position at xxx. I enjoyed meeting with you and learning more about this position and xxx.

The position seems to be an excellent match for both my clinical research experience and medical background. The fast-paced and dynamic working environment you described fuels my enthusiasm and desire to work with your group.

In addition to my attention to detail and ability to simultaneously handle multiple tasks, I bring strong communication skills and an assertive, positive attitude. I am confident that with my professional accomplishments, motivation and sense of responsibility, I can quickly become a productive member of your team. 

Thank you again for your consideration and time. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

 

Sincerely,

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• 你具體能做什麽？這個位置需要做些什麽？這個公司有什麽特色？你去了能為他們做些什麽？ -Manymore- ♀ (75 bytes) () 02/24/2015 postreply 17:05:23

• 還有這個director是做什麽的？你知道她什麽風格嗎？你去做這個位置的話能幫到她什麽呢？ -Manymore- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2015 postreply 17:06:34

• 既然已經見過麵試官了。 應該就她介紹的內容，寫寫你能對這個組帶來的優惠。 -jiuyuetianxin- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2015 postreply 17:14:53

• 多大的公司？既然麵試了為啥還要寫書麵材料，搞的象中學生考試 -用戶名被占用了- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2015 postreply 18:26:27

• +1 -arcsigh- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2015 postreply 18:32:50

• 選擇是雙方的。你要她寫份材料給你，大意是她那公司有哪些可以吸引你去。 -arcsigh- ♀ (189 bytes) () 02/24/2015 postreply 18:34:45

• 寫得太短了，太泛泛了，有些用詞可以改得更好些。 -mickey222- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2015 postreply 20:30:45

• director 回信了 -willows- ♀ (278 bytes) () 02/25/2015 postreply 13:01:50

• 對，接著找吧。 那個錢有沒有還難說呢。 -jiuyuetianxin- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/25/2015 postreply 16:54:46