這樣拒絕已經接受的offer,委婉不?

Dear Johnny,
I appreciate you extend me the offer.
I am writing this email to let you that I just received another offer today which I can reject.
Therefore, I will not work for your company at this moment, I wish the chance will come in the future, so I will be happy to be your slave again.

Thanks for your understanding.

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• 好像錯了一個關鍵詞, 應為: ...which I can't reject. -visio2000- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2010 postreply 06:03:17

• Yes, 老土錯了一個關鍵詞, 應為: ...which I can't reject. 3Q! -美國老土- ♂ (46 bytes) () 09/28/2010 postreply 07:35:09

• 謝謝。參考了各位的意見和網上的信息，今早給HM電話講了，很心虛地說。 -一兒一女一枝花- ♀ (164 bytes) () 09/28/2010 postreply 12:22:01