哪位幫忙看一看，thank you letter

Dear XXX:
It was very enjoyable to speak with you about the Programmer Analyst position at the XXXXXX(company name). The job, as you presented, it seems to be a very good match for my skills and interests. I am ready for the challenges you described. I got my computer science Ms. degree with 5 years java/j2ee web application experiences. I will contribute to the position strong java/j2ee programming and problem resolving skills to the team at XXXXXX(company name).
I appreciate the time you took to interview me. I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you about this position.
Sincerely,

Dan

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• I will contribute my strong java/j2ee programming and problem r -我邊走邊問- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 11:50:51

• problem resolving skills to the position -我邊走邊問- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 11:51:23

• 謝謝，我改了! -hello11- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 11:55:32

• 寫多了。 -sigma- ♂ (26 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 11:57:28

• for your ref -mudar- ♀ (88 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 12:00:23

• not it seems , use I think ... -我邊走邊問- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 12:14:44

• and -mudar- ♀ (78 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 12:05:28

• AN empty. sorry:) -mudar- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 12:10:58

• 建議：抓住對方說的話的重點，表述一下。 -pan_xyang- ♀ (487 bytes) () 06/09/2010 postreply 17:59:58