another short story. complete fiction

Iris has been a friend of mine since high school. Nobody would use "beautiful" to describe Iris. But the fact always lost on guys when they were enchanted by her slender figure, soft voice, the smooth, lady-like movement, especially her dark bright eyes which betrayed the owner's intelligence and sometimes stubbornness (of course, lost on guys as well). Iris did enjoy the attentions from boys and quickly started dating one of the most eager boys. The dating was covered under many gatherings of friends. So her parents never had any clue until the senior year in high school.

Iris's parents were both professors at a very prestigious university. Iris was their only daughter. She was raised up in the university campus (Tu Mu Yuan) under strict rules and careful educations. In her parents' minds, Iris would be the last of all girls to do anything wrong, particularly dating boys in high school. When news came that Iris was seen kissing a boy in a theater, this was a blow to her parents, and subsequently a "perfect storm" for Iris.

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I am not good at writing essays, much less telling stories. Suggestions will be welcomed. please save any sarcasm

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• I must fall in love with Iris! -HappyNow?!- ♂ (27 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 16:43:12

• don't worry I can make you and Iris together :-) -cathy_Bay- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 17:46:08

• would greatly appreciate if add these to your story... -HappyNow?!- ♂ (90 bytes) () 04/15/2010 postreply 06:55:44

• 寫得很好啊，繼續繼續：) -veggiedoggie- ♀ (214 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 18:54:01

• 順便8一個 -veggiedoggie- ♀ (603 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:04:16

• you are always so funny.. -pega- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:12:44

• 你真逗。 -jill08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:14:40

• 你的女朋友？想起了前一陣有人在這發帖說 -成則愉- ♀ (108 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:39:34

• here's a suggestion(since you asked:) add doggie in your story : -pega- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:18:48

• 別別別，以我對我那個Iris的了解：談戀愛happy的都是她，最後送斷交信的都是我：( -veggiedoggie- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:21:50

• 最後被她派去給人送斷交信的，都是我：( -veggiedoggie- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:22:30

• don't worry.. this is fiction iris, not true iris.. plus, -pega- ♀ (75 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:25:56

• 好8呀...... -成則愉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2010 postreply 19:41:02

• 把這個Iris換成我姐，就是我家的故事了。 -驢驢- ♀ (80 bytes) () 04/15/2010 postreply 07:15:45

• ooops.. turns out it's not fiction after all.. :) -pega- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2010 postreply 09:10:45