Workable cover letter 的樣本，能否善心改一下，算是救人一命

For the industry job, the cover latter is not necessarily to be long. Please modify the following one:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from internet that you have a Sr. Slave position opening right now, please consider me as a candidate.
Attached herein please find a copy of my resume.
You can see from my resume that I graduated from SanLv univ in China and have N years experience as a Slave in Microhoo.
With my education, experience and dedicate work spirit, I am sure I am the best candidate for your Sr. Slave position. Would you please let me know when will be the best time for me to visi your company?

The best way to contact me is through email: [e-mail]

Sincerely Yours,


ABC

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• 嘿嘿，老土大俠，我覺得我的Cover letter 寫的情真意切的 -woshi54321- ♀ (22 bytes) () 03/31/2009 postreply 12:45:33

• Cover letter 寫再好, 不如有個好廣告. 發送出去沒銀call,第一件事改廣告. -美國老土- ♂ (182 bytes) () 03/31/2009 postreply 12:50:37

• 我有一件事現在可問你嗎？ -woshi54321- ♀ (218 bytes) () 03/31/2009 postreply 12:57:15

• Yes, 有99件事都可問, 今晚村裏電話會聽大夥咋說吧... 3q! -美國老土- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/31/2009 postreply 14:44:17