A Thousand Miles Deep/深海

A Thousand Miles Deep/深海

                                                A pool of little fish/一江小魚

A beautiful autumn leaf/一片美麗的秋葉

Floating on the peaceful sea/飄在靜靜的海麵

Only I am a little blue fish/我是一隻小魚

A thousand miles deep/在深海裏，憂鬱

I’m turning tricks/我在變戲法

I’m getting fixed /我在吸毒品

I am afraid to lose my grip/害怕我一放手

And let you slip/你會飄走

I have my promises to keep/可是我有諾言要守

I can only weep/我隻能

A thousand miles deep/在深海裏，哭泣

 

Tide up and tide down/潮起潮落

You are getting closed to the shore/你已飄近海灘

And Sorry I have to leave/難過，不能再傍你左右

‘Cause I can’t breathe/y因為我，無法呼吸

Somewhere beyond the sea/在這片海之外

So please，let it be /請讓一切隨波逐流

And let me go asleep /請讓我

A thousand miles deep/在深海裏，沉睡

  

PS: 先寫了英文版的，念了幾遍，很押韻，自我感覺良好。試著翻譯成中文，少了一些味道和意境，沒辦法完全表達好，隻好湊合著用。

靈感來自昨天聽了的兩首歌：Leonard Cohen的A thousand kisses deep，和趙傳的深海。這是兩首巨好聽的歌。 

A Thousand Kisses Deep

Leonard Cohen

The ponies run, the girls are young,
The odds are there to beat.
You win a while, and then it’s done –
Your little winning streak.
And summoned now to deal
With your invincible defeat,
You live your life as if it’s real,
A Thousand Kisses Deep.

I’m turning tricks, I’m getting fixed,
I’m back on Boogie Street.
You lose your grip, and then you slip
Into the Masterpiece.
And maybe I had miles to drive,
And promises to keep:
You ditch it all to stay alive,
A Thousand Kisses Deep.

And sometimes when the night is slow,
The wretched and the meek,
We gather up our hearts and go,
A Thousand Kisses Deep.

Confined to sex, we pressed against
The limits of the sea:
I saw there were no oceans left
For scavengers like me.
I made it to the forward deck.
I blessed our remnant fleet –
And then consented to be wrecked,
A Thousand Kisses Deep.

I’m turning tricks, I’m getting fixed,
I’m back on Boogie Street.
I guess they won’t exchange the gifts
That you were meant to keep.
And quiet is the thought of you,
The file on you complete,
Except what we forgot to do,
A Thousand Kisses Deep.

And sometimes when the night is slow,
The wretched and the meek,
We gather up our hearts and go,
A Thousand Kisses Deep.

The ponies run, the girls are young,
The odds are there to beat . . .

 

深海
趙傳

就讓我沉溺愛深不見底
抵抗痛苦沒有力氣
我愛你從不盼你 回報萬分之一
你不該走的那麽徹底
就讓我忘記 再回到過去
欺騙自己比較容易
我好想醉身海裏 遠離風風雨雨
拔掉我心上所有呼吸
怎知我情深似海 全都是淚來灌溉
困陷在感情深淵不能醒來
海越深越是平靜越是冰冷
愛越深越是執著越是天真
我對你情深似海 你毫不眷戀離開
你教我怎麽相信昨天存在
誰不想一旦付出就要精彩
偏偏你選擇他來給你未來

所有跟帖： 

• 回複：A Thousand Miles Deep/深海 -jingqiu- ♀ (195 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 07:27:26

• 秋MM好溫柔呀，暈了暈了，徹底暈了！！！ -一江小魚- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 07:48:59

• 一把溫柔，濃情無限。。。。。暈的徹底！！！:))))) -jingqiu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:40:30

• 最怕溫柔的，腳軟了。小哥，扶我一把...... -一江小魚- ♂ (26 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:55:29

• 眼紅ing。。。。。 -han人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 07:50:20

• 大將軍豪氣衝天，豈可兒女情長？。。。。：）））） -jingqiu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:42:59

• 一片深情！為顯感激之情，請小魚兒給回譯成英文。。。 -羅曼- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:04:35

• 曼哥，秋MM，翻譯詩詞容易，翻譯意境很難。我隻能試試，請斧正。 -一江小魚- ♂ (2497 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:23:54

• 問好羅班！：））） -jingqiu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:45:41

• 會寫英文詩？太崇拜你了！！！非常同學來一下，改成咱傳統的 :) -han人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 07:32:06

• 額等著..... -一江小魚- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 07:49:40

• 這一首特別好。。。特別有感覺........ -舞女- ♀ (2193 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 07:34:41

• 喜歡的話，讓三十哥改改送給你。嘿嘿..... -一江小魚- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 07:51:21

• 有才喔 -九婷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:00:55

• 婷MM，N年不見了，想你啊.... -一江小魚- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:34:06

• 有魚油嗎？ -賈平凸- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:33:53

• 魚油就像深海裏的溝，擠一擠，勉強有兩滴。 -一江小魚- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 08:40:23

• 是E文那首更好。。。油菜 -玉珠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 10:27:31

• 謝謝珠MM，抱抱.... -一江小魚- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 10:40:49

• 小魚你浮出水麵吧。。 -林笑- ♂ (17 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 13:18:29

• 不貼照片啊？老姐懶得看字啊 -得了吧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 16:29:23

• 很好的詩... -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/20/2011 postreply 05:50:14