試譯虔謙的《冬林心語》

冬林心語

虔謙

冬末的早晨 
暖陽出來了
樹林的哪裏
傳來劈裏啪啦的聲音
是鬆蕾剝裂了
還是鳥雛出了殼
是蛇纏住了它的獵物
還是新芽出了土 …...

四周靜極了
隻有那執著的聲音
不時響起
一團雪掉下來
落在了我的腳盤上
我低下頭來
聽到了心底
一朵花綻放的聲響


The Heartfelt Murmur in a Winter Wood

Written by Qianqian

Translated by Ju xiting

It's a late winter morning,
When a balmy sun is rising;
From somewhere in the wood,
Wafts over some crackling.
Is a pine bud cracking
Or a baby bird hatching?
Is a snake squeezing its prey
Or out of earth is a sprout burgeoning...?
 
It's so quiet all around, 
But only that persistant sound
Is fitfully heard to resound.
Here a snow lump thumps down
Right onto my foot;
Lowering my head,
I hear in my heart,
A flower bursts open aloud.

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• 好詩 ！好譯！ -niteBynite- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2015 postreply 16:43:17

• 合一個，也很喜歡虔謙的作品 -niteBynite- ♀ (1255 bytes) () 02/15/2015 postreply 16:51:08

• 特喜歡最後一句詩眼：一朵花綻放的聲響 -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2015 postreply 17:34:49

• 收藏了，感謝聚曦亭！也謝謝 niteBynite 和小曼，賀新春！ -虔謙- ♀ (69 bytes) () 02/16/2015 postreply 20:15:21

• 真喜歡，佩服你的詩歌造詣和英文能力！再次感謝！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2015 postreply 20:19:34

• 譯得很棒！　 -~葉子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2015 postreply 23:39:20

• 謝謝讚賞！ -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/18/2015 postreply 08:20:27

• 譯得真好，謝分享，並祝聚曦亭春節快樂。 -斯葭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2015 postreply 19:52:27

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