何物在獨白?

來源: falsetruth 2010-11-06 19:38:04 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀: 次 (268 bytes)
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a turtle starts to push his way

into a bush to find his May

arriving at my yawning door

he thrusts in and out till he's sour

the bush is suddenly flooded

my valley becomes so mudded

when it's time for my door to shut

the turtle slips back to his hut

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when he arrives --> arriving at, 妹--> May (五月花) -falsetruth- 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2010 postreply 20:00:00

點擊你主貼裏的[編輯],即可把[妹]該成[May].你的詩總是如此的押韻. -婉蕠- 給 婉蕠 發送悄悄話 婉蕠 的博客首頁 (248 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 08:58:06

thank you. it's a name -falsetruth- 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (171 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 09:54:22

Got it. Thank you. Have a nice Sunday. -婉蕠- 給 婉蕠 發送悄悄話 婉蕠 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 10:24:35

Oops,I meant so type:"One more thing". -婉蕠- 給 婉蕠 發送悄悄話 婉蕠 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 16:55:54

also you meant -falsetruth- 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (82 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 18:31:09

Yeah, thanks. Good night. -婉蕠- 給 婉蕠 發送悄悄話 婉蕠 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 19:47:21

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