【我與AI】以原創七絕測試AI的英譯水平

As the author, I am in a better position to judge my translator, be it an AI or otherwise. 

平水韻拙作：

苦茶甘味酒無緣，壺吐香魂淡淡煙。 

去日天涯輕一顧，半生風雨到窗前。

……

ChatGPT英譯：

Bitter tea, sweet wine hold no relation,

Pouring out fragrance, a light smoke rises.

Yesterday's journey to the horizon, just a glance, 

Half a life of wind and rain, arrives at the window.

……

My feedback:

ChatGPT didn't make the grade. Indeed, poetry is above its pay grade. It has little sense of aesthetics, if at all. 

 

Author: Ren Qiulan 

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• 哈，我也做了類似的測試。讓AI寫詩，古詩格律基本都是錯的。現代詩也是中小學水平，八股味。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 16:47:43

• 謝謝盈盈！AI比人最不足之處是情商（EQ），嚴重缺乏同理心。詩歌是情感的升華，機器何來靈性呢？ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 17:22:13

• I won't blame AI for failing to follow the classical rules. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:46:48

• 半生風雨到窗前。這句是真的好。每次讀都忍不住讚。。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 17:01:53

• 人在天涯吧。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 17:26:26

• Would you be kind enough to translate my punchline? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:41:33

• 那需要好好領會一下這句詩的意味深長 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2023 postreply 13:09:26

• 無緣翻譯成no relation：）想知道你的英文版本會翻譯成什麽樣：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:34:42

• Thank you! I can't wait to see your version. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:37:38

• Why don't you give it a shot? It's open season on chatGPT. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:39:48

• 在英文翻譯方麵，我還得和你學：）等你的版本：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:41:08

• You are working in an English-speaking setting. Come on! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:42:33

• Alas, chapGPT couldn't even make a complete sentence. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:45:04

• 哈哈，我在攝壇看到了這個AI 翻譯的還挺Chinglish, So is in ur case, -移花接木- ♂ (330628 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 05:27:30

• Thank you! In your case AI wasn't that far off the mark. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 07:28:06

• 好通透的一首七絕，人淡如茶，唯風雅賞。 -送讚幹部- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 06:06:51

• Thank you! Just another attempt of mine, no more & no less. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 07:29:44

• "Indeed, poetry is above its pay grade", totally agree! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 07:59:43

• 謝謝小西！人工智能是數學的載體。人卻可以詩數兼容、兼融。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 09:08:23