A very heart-warming story that reminds me of my childhood too,

There are some typos:

While our whole family sitting around the .... were/was sitting

bitten egg > beaten eggs

after been seasoned > after being seasoned (coated)

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• Great! Thank you so much for proof reading my writing, Rancho. -念親- ♀ (177 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 09:08:06

• Oops, proofreading should be one word. -念親- ♀ (3242 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 20:38:50