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回答: After your second revision,rancho20082015-07-11 14:12:48

immersing in a worn-out fairy tale book > immersed in a worn-out fairy tale book.

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Revised. Thanks a million. -JasmineZ- 給 JasmineZ 發送悄悄話 JasmineZ 的博客首頁 (180 bytes) () 07/12/2015 postreply 01:40:41

Did you actually correct them? Many errors are still there. -rancho2008- 給 rancho2008 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/12/2015 postreply 08:52:10

It is updated now. I must have hit 'Cancel' instead of update -JasmineZ- 給 JasmineZ 發送悄悄話 JasmineZ 的博客首頁 (139 bytes) () 07/13/2015 postreply 04:18:05

There are more left uncorrected or your corrections are wrong -rancho2008- 給 rancho2008 發送悄悄話 (2063 bytes) () 07/13/2015 postreply 12:10:35

Updated. Thank you. -JasmineZ- 給 JasmineZ 發送悄悄話 JasmineZ 的博客首頁 (99 bytes) () 07/14/2015 postreply 04:58:40

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