I just read your revised essay, and most of the errors are now c

there are still more than 10 errors left. If you proofread it more carefully, you will find them out. Some of them are very obvious, while some are not that easy to correct.

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• Further revisions have been made -JasmineZ- ♀ (216 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 08:02:34

• 昨天給你提的兩處你還沒改。其一 -youdecide- ♂ (129 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 08:34:46

• 我這個白 癡又上當了。 -youdecide- ♂ (51 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 09:50:38

• Discuss: 20-mile-trip -JasmineZ- ♀ (368 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 11:52:47

• 9-year-old 可以 -youdecide- ♂ (69 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 12:27:13

• Thank you. -JasmineZ- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2015 postreply 04:20:56