Generally speaking, very good. :)

If you could put in some more passion, and have more control on the pace....

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• 多謝高手點評。最近有何新作？ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2014 postreply 05:37:44

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• Living the dream. Nice. -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/18/2014 postreply 05:09:31