Red-eye Flight ( A Poem Reading Tuesday Production:))

Red-eye Flight

 

You look at the night

through your dark eyes

that search for light.

 

You look at your flight

through your red eyes

that wanna shutter tight.

 

Drifting in your eyes are

the scarlet morning clouds

that are gonna burn

and become bright.

 

 

Notes:

This poem was inspired by the poem “I look at the world” by Langston Hughes and was written during lunch break on Feb. 20, 2024.

 

 

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• Go兄真是妙思聯想，神來之筆，好詩！謝謝分享。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 12:08:38

• 都是因為小西組織的活動帶來的靈感，非常感謝！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 12:18:36

• 謝謝Go兄對活動的支持和鼓勵。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 12:24:20

• 哈哈,in this way,to write an E poem is much easier than 7絕:） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 12:24:43

• I wish it was easy to write E poems:) -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:24:43

• 第一句化自顧城的名句麽？：） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 17:31:02

• 半句吧，"that search for light" -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:25:29

• 讚！ Go兄才思敏捷 -天邊一片白雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 17:40:40

• 謝謝天兄！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:26:05

• humorous -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2024 postreply 18:47:43

• You have a different perspective -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:26:59

• Brief but meaningful! From dark to bright, we are searchin好詩 -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 01:28:38

• 謝謝暖冬鼓勵！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:27:42