轉一段中英對照，可以看得出來，英譯時我已經順便做了再創作

雨下得好大。雨聲裏我想起了布萊恩和湯姆，還有哥哥跟我一起在中國度過的數個寒冬。我突然想起來，美國和中國最大的節日都是在一年最冷的日子裏……
紅紅的火在壁爐裏從容地燃著。                                                
                                   

The rain was now pouring down outside. Hearing the sound of water coming down I thought of Brian and Tom and I thought of the winters that Dakun and I had spent in China. Those cold days were on my mind and I wondered why the biggest holidays in the American and China both fell in the coldest season.

A fire was burning inside the fireplace as the music continued, “Joyful, Joyful…”

 

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• 謝謙謙分享[一個聖誕節的雨夜奇遇]中英片段,譯編的真棒,祝賀你的譯作發表。謙謙是寫作翻譯樣樣行,對文學執著的多產作家。 -斕婷- ♀ (1295 bytes) () 12/02/2015 postreply 11:37:27

• 斕婷，才讀到這個。謝謝你告知。我還沒讀過，會去拜讀學些。謝謝提供連接！問候！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/17/2016 postreply 07:42:54