湊個熱鬧，也譯《銀河碎了》

銀河碎了

 

虔謙

 

有一條路

叫做回不去

我一步三回首

看見你還站在路的的那一頭

那個仲夏夜裏你的琅琅笑語

化入了那知時節的雁鳴聲聲

銀河碎了

碎成滿天欲滴的寒星 

 

The Shattered Milky Way

 

There is a road, 

No retrace back, that's called.

Walking on it, I keep looking back 

And see you are still on the other end.

That midsummer night's laughs of yours;

Now the honks of the migrating geese,

That shatter the Milk Way

Into the skyful of drooping, cold stars.

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• 真棒 -李唐- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2015 postreply 14:13:58

• 謝謝，你的譯文也很好。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (6 bytes) () 02/20/2015 postreply 14:17:30

• 謝謝聚曦亭分享美詩佳譯,春節快樂! -南山鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2015 postreply 05:44:26

• 譯得真好，謝謝聚曦亭分享，並祝春節快樂。 -斯葭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/23/2015 postreply 11:12:05