思念, 記得 - 和朋友一起玩兒

那天我找到了 夐虹的《記得》 , 很高興 , 把它發給女友 SIDNEY. 她回信說 : 很美 , 是你寫得嗎 ? 我突然玩興大發 , 就把我以前寫得一首《思念》 發給她 , 問她這首怎樣 ? 她說也很好 . 我就告訴她一首是我的 , 一首是 夐虹的 . 問她看不看得出那首是我寫的 .

她說她真的兩首都很喜歡 , 但是可以猜一猜 . 她真的猜中了 . 而且她還喜歡我這首多一些 ! 並保證不是為了安慰我 .

這一點後來被進一步證實了 . 因為她在她自己的博客轉了我這首小詩 , 還為它配了音樂和圖 . 這幾行笨拙的文字被她一包裝 , 真的變得很美 .

轉在這裏 , 自我陶醉一下 . 也算是我與她第一次合作 . 哈哈 …

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by you? Beautiful.

how about this one, do you like it?

is that by you? Very good one.

One is by me, one is not. guess which is which, let me see if you... hehe

I can't tell. I feel both like your style. I love both, seriously.
This one? Just guess.

jide, is by qionghong, a famous taiwanese poet. i liked her poems a lot when i was young. i searched this poem because I wanted to quote a few lines in the article talking about the painting.

Hey, see, I guess right.

so you proved you were my gal:)
how did you guess? I believe mine is not as good as that one, which is obvious.haha

nonono. I love yours better. It's so sweet and warm. woman in love. hehe~

it was written many years ago. this one actually is a little sad,

To tell you the truth, I love yours more. hehe~ Can I re-post in back china? mention your name or not?

sure. you can mention yingxiu2006

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思念不會爭辯的
要是你想忘記

但它會得
在毫無理由的一刻
提琴的弦音般
爬上額頭
在眉尖 固執地
停留

會得象
滴階到明的雨水
徹夜地
在枕邊
細語

嗬思念
思念是春天時
戴在發際的一朵哀愁
是某一天
獨自走路時淡淡的微笑

[澀郎]

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