Rising Sun

草原之夜

翻唱：忒綠

 

Rising Sun
By TG

the sun rises in slo-mo 
from the shades of the clouds
painting 
fish belly white
orange yellow
rose red
lemon green 
for fear of disturbing the monotonous darkness 

in the oak trees 
the birds begin to try out their instruments
flute
trumpet
shakuhachi
reed-rope
Mongolian khumei
oboe 

dewdrops roll down from the tip of the grass
falling on the lawn softly 
a squirrel burrowing out of tree roots
still with a drowsy look
amber school bus drives into the community 
in the haze quietly 
like an old witch out of fairy tales 
takes away the children carrying schoolbags
from underneath the street lamps 

旭日
文｜忒綠

緩緩升起 
在雲的影裏 
塗抹
魚肚白 
橘子黃 
玫瑰紅
檸檬綠 
生怕驚擾了單調的黑色

鳥在橡樹上開始試奏各自的樂器
長笛
小號
尺八
蘆笙
呼嘜
雙簧管

露珠從草尖上 滾落
落在草坪上的聲音很輕
鬆鼠 鑽出樹根的洞穴
依然睡眼惺忪
琥珀色的校車朦朧中開進社區
像從童話裏出來的老巫婆 悄悄
帶走路燈下肩背書包的孩子
 

 

 

 

 

 

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Sarrah walters - Your comment beautifully captures the serene and magical moments of a rising sun. The description of the sun rising in slow motion, emerging from the shades of the clouds, evokes a sense of anticipation and awe. The vivid imagery of the sun\'s colors - fish belly white, orange yellow, rose red, and lemon green - showcases its gentle and cautious approach, as if afraid to disturb the darkness.The mention of birds in the oak trees trying out their instruments, from flute to trumpet, shakuhachi to reed-rope, and Mongolian khumei to oboe, adds a melodic and harmonious element to the scene. It paints a picture of nature waking up and creating a symphony of sounds to accompany the rising sun.The dewdrops rolling down the grass and the drowsy squirrel emerging from the tree roots further emphasize the tranquility and stillness of the early morning. The arrival of the amber school bus into the community, seemingly out of the haze like an old witch from fairy tales, adds an intriguing and whimsical touch. The mention of the bus taking away the children with their schoolbags under the walking lamps adds a sense of nostalgia and a glimpse into everyday life.Overall, your description captures the beauty, serenity, and subtle wonders of a sunrise, creating a vivid and enchanting scene. Enjoyable