煙圈兒 （二）

煙圈兒 （二）

一個夜色重疊著另一個夜色

煙頭忽亮忽暗的信號

變的捉摸不定

  

一個男人的歎息

被煙圈兒鎖在黑暗裏

  

他說

我啥也沒有了

。。。

別跟著我了

  

一個女人柔軟的長發

一個令人窒息的體溫

[oneline]

This one is better than the first one.
Subtle yet deeper. This style is more powerful!

I don't think you should post there, they will not understand
and they may misjudge you as a person.

Just my view.

Keep going, this is a form of creation of art with a few words.