將士魂 （仿楚辭體）

 

 

揮長劍兮碎九日，削泰山兮填河決。
戰共工於不周兮，旌旗墮兮援兵絕。
罡風嘯吼兮蒼穹搖，碧草血染兮車軸折。
身百傷兮猶苦鬥，形雖摧兮神不滅。

幽影悠悠兮慰未亡，卿節哀兮可夢高唐。
傷時勢兮之不我與，悲誌未伸兮身已沒。
哀孤孀之艱辛兮，恨君臣之無智節。
生有運數兮死有期，天道如輪兮未可寄。
魂魄歸來兮係瀟湘，情難斷兮地久天長。

[清雲]

Dear Guest Try:

Thank you for your poem. Since I do not know much about English poems, I am not be able to comment. No doubt, you poem is correct politically. You should formally put your poem into Wenxuecity, so more people can see it.
Regards,