Road

From here I looked over as far as I could

Along the road your back faded in the russet wood

So much wished I could journey with you

But so long I stared as so long I stood

A day cloud was dark and storm near

Up the grassy hill the road abruptly disappear

Suddenly I remembered the song you liked to hear

Suddenly I remembered the coat you used to wear

 

[rayray]

喜歡這個係列。圖文並茂，意境深遠。

[雨夜聽琴]

很美。。。。。。

[小村姑]

很真摯。。。

[Adagios]

You are absolutely right! "too" is a brush of "adding feet". It implies that there was already a company traveling with her/him.
I will take it out. Thanks a lot for revising.

[鐵拐鯉]

讀起來意猶未盡的感覺，那綿綿的思緒隨這這條路沒有盡頭。。

when read up to "the coat you liked to wear", the coat made me think more than the words itself.（令人遐想）

不太明白，why you put the "too" at the end of the 3rd line? just for rhyming?

anyway, 很美！