Love That Cat又有新的版本了

親愛的同網朋友，我最近一直在改我的故事，我的Love That Cat又有新的版本了。這次的修改是曆史性的，我將原來的84 verses的長故事，分成6章，每一章講一個相對獨立的小故事。這樣一來，孩子們讀起來輕鬆些，章與章之間能有個break停頓，將來還可以在這些地方配上插圖。

過兩天，我再貼新的版本。下麵是改的幾個verses

(old)

I named the new cat Mimi.

She would be my best friend.

A good time together,

We would happily spend.

(new)

I named the new cat Mimi.

She'd be my best friend, I knew.

We'd happily play together.

I'd be her best friend, too!

(old)

I went to her round plate.

A bit of cat food,I took.

I pretended to eatit.

She came closer to look.

(new)

I went to Mimi's plate and

Took some cat food, with a smile.

I pretended to eat it.

She stared at me for a while.

(old)

Let's solve the mystery.

Mimi made up her mind.

Behind the big mirror,

A clue, she went to find.

(new)

Mimi made up her mind

Let's solve the mystery now.

She went behind the mirror.

I heard her sharply say,"Meow!"