親愛的同網朋友,我最近一直在改我的故事,我的Love That Cat又有新的版本了。這次的修改是曆史性的,我將原來的84 verses的長故事,分成6章,每一章講一個相對獨立的小故事。這樣一來,孩子們讀起來輕鬆些,章與章之間能有個break停頓,將來還可以在這些地方配上插圖。 過兩天,我再貼新的版本。下麵是改的幾個verses (old) I named the new cat Mimi. She would be my best friend. A good time together, We would happily spend. (new) I named the new cat Mimi. She'd be my best friend, I knew. We'd happily play together. I'd be her best friend, too!
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I went to her round plate. A bit of cat food,I took. I pretended to eatit. She came closer to look. (new) I went to Mimi's plate and Took some cat food, with a smile. I pretended to eat it. She stared at me for a while.
(old) Let's solve the mystery. Mimi made up her mind. Behind the big mirror, A clue, she went to find. (new) Mimi made up her mind Let's solve the mystery now. She went behind the mirror. I heard her sharply say,"Meow!" |