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(老二的作文)Field trip at school

(2007-11-05 06:53:33) 下一個

In my group me and my friend saw a big building. It was so big. It was almost bigger than a 23rd floor and it was amazing. Then we walked to a clock and it was just a little smaller you know that we just talked about , remember that big thing ? Now we can talk about my story again, ok?  I am starting right now ok? Where was I again? O yeh, right here, then we walking, then we saw a house, and it had a big triangle on the top of the house.

 

The end, see you next time .

(六歲)Oct. 19, 2007

 

The teacher's comment: +++, you have a good sense of humour!

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