For the Woman of my life

So long I wished for this moment,

Sad and lonely I went,

 

From profile to profile looking everywhere,

On Internet I was hoping to find you there,

 

I was feeling abandoned and rejected, what a pity,

Until you finally answered me,

 

Now my heart is overwhelmed with joy, every single day,

You are my sunshine ray,

 

Being with you, holding you in my arms,

You are oh so warm,

 

Caressing your neck with my lips of fire,

Feeling you tremble with desire,

 

Like a beautiful sky of blue,

You are my wish come true,

 

I want to make you happy forever,

With all my love


- Dan on Oct. 7, 2008
 

附上W博士的美妙翻譯 ：）

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給我的今生愛人

如此盼望這一刻
長久的等待　使我暗淡使我寂寞

多少檔案一一翻過
網絡中我期待　你在那裏等我

仿佛已被拋棄和拒絕，我深深失落
直到終於　你回複了我

現在的每一天　快樂都在我的心中蕩漾
你是我明媚的陽光

和你在一起　擁你入懷
你是多麽地，啊，溫暖著我

我火熱的唇親吻著你潔白的脖頸
感受你　在愛中輕輕顫抖

恰如天空美麗的湛藍
你是我虔誠的夢　成真

我會給你幸福永遠
用我全部　全部的　愛情

[longhairr]

回複靜謐海灣的評論:
Thank you very much. Sorry, I almost overlooked your replies here. Last time when I saw your words under the recent post, I was happy and went to your blog reading for quite a while. I guess that's why I forgot to check whether you left more than that..hehe..

I'm glad to know that MM likes my story. Best wishes to you and your family as well. :)

[靜謐海灣]

回複worldling的評論:

很喜歡. 你的翻譯, 精確美麗， 熱烈深情。

[靜謐海灣]

So beautiful, touching and full of love and passion...

I am very happy for Longhair MM and Dan.

I read your love story and really enjoy it.

Wish all the best to you two,

[worldling]

長發妹，對我這種給個棒槌就當針使的人，你這回是趕鴨子上架了：）請長發和別的MM一定不吝斧正, 斧順, 斧精！

*************************************
給我的今生愛人

如此盼望這一刻
長久的等待　使我暗淡使我寂寞

多少檔案一一翻過
網絡中我期待　你在那裏等我

仿佛已被拋棄和拒絕，我深深失落
直到終於　你回複了我

現在的每一天　快樂都在我的心中蕩漾
你是我明媚的陽光

和你在一起　擁你入懷
你是多麽地，啊，溫暖著我

我火熱的唇親吻著你潔白的脖頸
感受你　在愛中輕輕顫抖

恰如天空美麗的湛藍
你是我虔誠的夢　成真

我會給你幸福永遠
用我全部　全部的　愛情

[longhairr]

回複worldling的評論:
Dr. W, long time not see you here. Nice to see you today.

Someone gave a task to translate this poem into Chinese so that Dan can recite it in Chinese someday. Could you help me on translation? :)

[longhairr]

回複想去看海的評論:
看海MM, you can feel my passions and love or his? I guess from this poem, it's his. :)

[longhairr]

回複阿貝的評論:
Thanks, A Bei. I was touched indeed. :)

[worldling]

"For the Woman of my life"

I am so touched right from this title.

Keep it up, Dan! You are a very very lucky man :-)

[想去看海]

So happy for Jiejie and Dan! I can feel your passions and love, best wishes to you.

[阿貝]

what a touching poem...
feel happy for longhair and Dan...
bless both of you...

[longhairr]

回複warmginger的評論:
不敢了,不敢了, 下次MM告訴我哪壺是開的吧,我就提那壺...嘿嘿...

[warmginger]

回複longhairr的評論: 長發，你真是哪壺不開提哪壺:-)

[longhairr]

回複hairycat的評論:
thanks. You are right, now I have some many babies in my life...small ones, and big one. :))

[longhairr]

回複warmginger的評論:
because you have got a cold again...hehe...do you find sb else to have a cold with you this time? :)

[warmginger]

This is simply so hot!!!
How come I came late for this one???

[hairycat]

longhair, this poem is red-hotly romantic. You must be a beautiful lady inside out so that you can inspire Dan wrote such a beautiful poem for you. Life with love is very beautiful, indeed.

Enjoy the beautiful life with your babies.

[longhairr]

回複南山鬆的評論:
It is a nice peom, isn't it? :)

[longhairr]

回複陳默的評論:
Life is beautiful indeed. JJ yourself have showed us that by your words and your stories as well. Thank you. :)

[longhairr]

回複ELEVEN的評論:
To be frank, I used to think he should be good at peoms than those analysis essays. However, he surprised me last time. Then, he surprised me again this time, but with joys.

I joked with him that he had learnt a lot from lyrics since he likes music a lot.

[longhairr]

回複mycereal的評論:
You LD doesn't have to say those three words because he has expressed them to you by actions all the time. Am I right? :)

[longhairr]

回複Eyre的評論:
Ger told me a little bit more about you. Now, I understand why we have many thoughts in common...hehe....Hug Hug!

[longhairr]

回複agentsmith的評論:
Your comment of "Don't hope.. just know it.." is so so correct...you see, Dan applied it to his reply.

[南山鬆]

So good!

Very nice!

[陳默]

Longhair,

I am really touched after reading your love story. It makes me feel that life is beautiful, soooooo beautiful!

Please say hi to Dan. :-)

[longhairr]

Thanks for all the nice words!

I would like to say that what happened to us is quite different from the movie, although there is some similitude.

Both Neo and I were awaken (kind of) from this dream, an apparent reality.
A reality that blinded us from the real world. But unlike the Matrix “real world”, the one I discovered was wonderful… And best of all in this “real world”, I share my life with this amazing woman.

I can say truly: I don’t think I’m the one for her, I know I am!

Dan

[歌兒]

Wow!!!!

I will have to find someone who can write such a peom for me! Well done Dan! you deserve longhair just like she deserves you!

Eyre: now it is your turn, get your big bear to write something like this! :)

[ELEVEN]

“Tears in my eyes for the grace and joy of love
All the best, best and best to longhair and Dan.”－－ZT

長發JJ，你們家這位先生可不僅僅會寫小論文呢，我看這首情詩更勝一籌：）

[mycereal]

oh, this is so sweet, so warm, so romantic, full of love and joy:-) ZT 100%.

我家那位，連個我愛你這句話都不會說。怎麽都不說。嗬嗬。

[Eyre]

OMG, what a beautiful and romantic poem
Tears in my eyes for the grace and joy of love
All the best, best and best
to longhair and Dan.

[agentsmith]

回複longhairr的評論:

Hehe, knock,knock:-)

This remind me of the words Morpheus once told Neo:" Don't think you are, know you are...."

Don't hope.. just know it.. you two will have a much better destiny! :-)

Best wish to Longhair and Dan:-))

[longhairr]

Agentsmith, the Matrix has you...
I love her (Longhair), as Neo loved Trinity.
I'm the chosen, one as Morpheus and the Oracle predicted. Hopefully, we will have a better destiny...

Dan

[agentsmith]

回複longhairr的評論:
of course, I am Agentsmith, I am always right on time...haha:)

[agentsmith]

Oh, this is so sweet, so warm, so romantic, full of love and joy:-)

Longhair: you are a lucky lady! happy for you and RR:)

[longhairr]

探長,你,你,你也太快了吧...我連EDIT都沒做好, 沙發就歸你了? :)

[agentsmith]

sofa!