杭州雨中遊
雨不作美添濛漪,
出遊幾無百興歸。
留點遺憾驅再次,
青山不老人常廻。
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讚,讚,這種生活化的詩其實不好寫,比較起來,所謂寫情的反倒更容易呢!
-小得-
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08/30/2012 postreply
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言中有實情,筆下本無詩。喜得昨日歸,臨席即興時。
-弓尒-
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08/30/2012 postreply
07:34:44
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