最後一句總覺得好像不太好,要不改成煢煢形單or寂寂秋寒,,會更好點?
謝謝夢兒的大鼎,
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• 喜歡 "寂寂秋寒" :) -我是夢兒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 18:27:49
• 我最開始就用的“寂寂秋寒”,好像比較重在“心”,瑟瑟似乎在“形”,明兒改回來:)) -小得- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 19:35:20
• 喜歡 "寂寂秋寒" :) -我是夢兒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 18:27:49
• 我最開始就用的“寂寂秋寒”,好像比較重在“心”,瑟瑟似乎在“形”,明兒改回來:)) -小得- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/13/2010 postreply 19:35:20
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