This poem is a good example that it needs no false drama to make poetry. As a reader I felt poetry start to enter gently with these lines:
山前有一排樹。雨來過,鬆鼠來過
青山之外,是河流,你看不見
Lin Mu is a good poet, but his recent works seemed to have declined in quality since he joined the 小團夥 led by jinjiao and dancingwolf and ...