against its shadow - like a grain of dark rice

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挺好的,去掉like. 因為-就可以了,且暗喻。
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03/25/2023 postreply
20:52:02
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我覺得dark 改成black 好。更direct and solid in color.
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03/25/2023 postreply
21:04:27
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想想還是 dark 合適些。Black 太具體了。
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03/25/2023 postreply
21:57:57
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選你自己喜歡的詞語更好。
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03/26/2023 postreply
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