不敢不敢。。隱約記得好像之前貼過？

I think they are very nice. Interesting exercise too.

Just a thought came into my mind while reading:

"Echoing the silence of the night..." 

"Answering the silence of the night..."?   

Since silence can be a kind of sound too, that way it is more like a dialogue between the flute and the night.

  

 

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• 好記性！去年的舊詩，當時寫得匆忙，我一直嫌棄其中的粗糙。所以這次做了潤色修改。又新加了英文版。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (320 bytes) () 06/19/2022 postreply 03:03:01

• 這次我將這首七絕的第三句全部重寫了。以前那句詩裏意象太多，月亮，曲溪，簫笛，全出現在一句裏，顯得太擁擠。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (139 bytes) () 06/19/2022 postreply 03:37:32