【四言名詩】Why did I dream of you last night? 緣何夢君？

Why did I dream of you last night?  緣何夢君？

 

Why did I dream of you last night?                            緣何夢君？

Now morning is pushing back hair with grey light      拂曉暗褪

Memories strike home, like slaps in the face;            舊憶叩扉

Raised on elbow, I stare at the pale fog                     以肘支頤

beyond the window.                                                 透窗凝霧

 

So many things I had thought forgotten                  原以皆忘

Return to my mind with stranger pain:                    豈料憶潰

—Like letters that arrive addressed to someone      似箋翩至

Who left the house so many years ago.                   昔人已去

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• 中文的更有味道，似乎“原以皆忘”可以再推敲，可我也想不出建議 -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/02/2021 postreply 18:11:33

• 對的，這句翻的問題比較嚴重。有網友建議翻成：前塵似忘，夢回神傷。我覺得更好些。 -WXCTEATIME- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/02/2021 postreply 19:18:38