伯牙子期版
Missing you at the autumn night
Wondering upon cooling light
Falling pine-cone keeps empty mountain quite
Who stays upright tonight?
懷春版
Missing you at the autumn night
Wondering upon cooling light
Empty mountain sees falling pine-cone bright
She stays sleepless tight
我對詩歌的理解非常狹隘-----沒有韻腳，無以成歌。所以詩歌追求韻律是我的迷信教條
