譯得好！我隻想了後兩句：

Echoes are heard, among this deep mountain, of pine cones falling.

Alone and secluded, you must also be up, and listening.

所有跟帖： 

• 不錯，後麵的 listening 加的尤其好 -慢兔- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 16:24:41

• 謝謝。其它的字都是為了這個listening而後加上的。。 -東風再起- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 18:02:22