A nice read. here my $0.02:)

因為我不能停止走向死亡

Because I could not stop for Death –
因為我不能停止走向死亡—

He kindly stopped for me –
他親切地為我停留——

The Carriage held but just Ourselves –
這輛馬車可容納的隻有我們自己——

And Immortality. 
還有永生。

(The first stanza)

 

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• thanks! -馮墟- ♂ (701 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 07:41:52

• you did a good job thanks for sharing your art:) -忒忒綠- ♂ (214 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 07:45:00

• a beautiful thing about reading a poem is you can have -馮墟- ♂ (236 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 10:04:31

• she together w Death passed the schl, fields, graves? no -忒忒綠- ♂ (147 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 10:12:00

• that has been the mainstream interpretation. Also mine. -馮墟- ♂ (91 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 10:21:38