Shell

Shell

What's inside a shell
Heaven or hell
Flesh or soul
Fold and roll
Swirl and twirl
till the birth of a pearl

vague © 5 hours ago

Likes: OpenLeapling, shdpoems

OpenLeapling - Lovely rhyme. So much pressure was put into that shell. How long does it take to get that pearl to come forth? Yes, at the start of it all what was first put into the shell to transform into "a pearl"

Nicely penned

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• Lovely rhyme.：）好問題，必須都具備吧，heaven and hell, flesh and soul... -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 16:51:16

• 謝謝，也許，大雜燴 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:36:05

• 必須大雜燴啊，那樣煉出的才是真珍珠。：）顫音不寫中文詩了嗎？我很喜歡你寫的中文詩的味道。。。 -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:42:22

• 謝謝！好像沒有什麽感覺，書看少了 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 21:03:23

• 都研究英文去了。。。 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2022 postreply 05:26:08

• 5小時前寫的，好詩！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:16:42

• 特新鮮！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:16:58

• 讚！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:35:35

• 謝謝貓 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:36:21

• 很富想象力！A beautiful and meaningful piece. Love it! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2022 postreply 04:47:17

• very nice! -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2022 postreply 05:14:33

• Till chanyin's reveal Till people can tell. Hahahah -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2022 postreply 05:23:04