跟譯 <無言獨上西樓>

Joy at Meeting

Alone in silence
Ascending the west building,
Crescent moon curves like a hook.
Deep courtyard with lonely Parasol trees 
Locks the desolate autumn.

Not cuttable,
Not sortable,
Is the sorrow of parting.
There are indescribable feelings
Stired up in my heart .

無言獨上西樓，            
月如鉤。                          
寂寞梧桐深院鎖清秋。  
剪不斷，                          
理還亂，                          
是離愁。                           
別是一般滋味在心頭。

所有跟帖： 

• 西樓，應該可以通過upstairs和west wing的組合翻譯出來。看了你和樓下的，第一梗就梗在西樓上了。 -墨瑞- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 09:22:55

• 第一感：Wordless, I was alone in the West Tower(Wing). 不知怎麽樣。。。 -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 09:48:15

• Wordless,alone,up in the West Wing, / A hook,the crescent Moon, -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 10:12:59

• /Parasol trees in their loneliness,the deep -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 10:15:44

• courtyard has been isolated( locked) from (in)this( late )Autum -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 10:17:20

• 未細琢。 -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 11:03:29

• 這麽多好建議，都收下了，謝謝兩位詩人。 -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 12:31:25

• I like it ! -中間小謝- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 13:44:25

• 好譯學習！問好E MM ：）））））））） -阿童木牧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2017 postreply 23:03:45