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It seems sunlight leak, igniting a pot of gold on XiangLu peak,

 

Right in front of huge waterfall, from the Mount top to feet.

 

It flows from so high, 

Just like the milkyway comes to visit.

 

 

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• 很有趣。不過不象翻譯，象原詩的變奏。 -中間小謝- ♂ (80 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 09:01:19

• 謝謝鼓勵 -linbiao571- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 09:02:42