詩人前兩句似在戶外,後來兩個都在室內,有些跳躍
墨脈好詩欣賞!同意九兄的問題,這句敲窗可議。
所有跟帖:
• 有道理,酌酌修改。 -momo_sharon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2017 postreply 21:58:27
• 有道理,酌酌修改。 -momo_sharon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2017 postreply 21:58:27
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