與夜相熟 /Acquainted with the Night

我已經與夜晚相熟                 a
我在雨裏出行又在雨裏歸來        b
我走過城市光亮的最遠處。         a
  
我俯看城市的小巷滿是悲哀     b
我路過那個正在值更的警察               c
我不去理會，也不願有些對白        b
  
我站立聆聽，腳步聲因此停下           c
當遠處傳來一聲斷續的呼喊        d
掠過另外一條街上的幾戶人家    c
  
卻不是喚我回去或與我說再見       d
而在更遠處一個詭異的高度    a
一隻熠熠發光的鍾垂在天邊   d
    
它標示的時間不正確也不錯誤  a
唉，我已經與這夜晚相熟     a
    
    
    aba bcb cdc dad aa

 

 

Acquainted with the Night 
   
BY ROBERT FROST
   
I have been one acquainted with the night. 
I have walked out in rain—and back in rain. 
I have outwalked the furthest city light. 
   
I have looked down the saddest city lane. 
I have passed by the watchman on his beat 
And dropped my eyes, unwilling to explain. 
   
I have stood still and stopped the sound of feet 
When far away an interrupted cry 
Came over houses from another street, 
   
But not to call me back or say good-bye; 
And further still at an unearthly height, 
One luminary clock against the sky 
   
Proclaimed the time was neither wrong nor right. 
I have been one acquainted with the night.

所有跟帖： 

• 好！這個有難度！喜歡 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2016 postreply 14:27:18

• 謝鼓勵，欣賞你的 sonnet 詩係列。 -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2016 postreply 15:21:36

• 好，讚！ -風中一塵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2016 postreply 14:47:50

• 謝風中一塵詩人鼓勵！翻譯為拋磚引玉。 -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2016 postreply 15:23:04

• 學習 欣賞 讚 -葉虻- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2016 postreply 17:26:43

• 譯文韻腳處理得到位，傳遞了原作的風韻。讚！ -曲未平- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/03/2016 postreply 10:55:24

• 讚。有多處的正確含意或詞句值得推敲。愚見。 -Willie_USA- ♂ (479 bytes) () 12/03/2016 postreply 12:31:54

• 嗯，是得在推敲一下。 -elzevir- ♀ (779 bytes) () 12/03/2016 postreply 14:59:50

• watchman on his beat 不是警察。相似於打更/巡更的？應該是巡警的前身？這首詩要透過詩去讀！ -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/03/2016 postreply 17:43:24