Narrow daylight---詩寫 （提上來，大家多提意見） ：）阿童可費了好多柴啊！ ：））））

Lyrics   Narrow daylight 

Narrow daylight entered my room
Shining hours were brief
Winter is over
Summer is near
Are we stronger than we believe?

流光

細細流光入我房，傾心一瞬轉成殤！

來年冬盡風還夏，可煉君心韌至昌？

I walked through halls of reputation
Among the infamous too
As the camera clings to the common thread
Beyond all vanity
Into a gaze to shoot you through

風華落寞曆高堂，照影銀光點點藏。

榮虛化作東流水，凝眸一刻可留香？

Is the kindness we count upon
Hidden in everyone?

青山處處覓柔腸，俠骨豪情幾善良？

I stepped out in a sunlit grove
Although deep down I wished it would rain
Washing away all the sadness and tears
That will never fall so heavily again

獨步疏林落日光，卻尋風雨洗天殤。

一朝暴卷濃愁去，晴空萬裏去愁長。

Is the kindness we count upon
Is hidden in everyone

青山處處覓柔腸，俠骨豪情幾善良？

I stood there in the salt spray air
Felt wind sweeping over my face
I ran up through the rocks to the old
Wooden cross
It's a place where I can find some peace

烈烈鹽風掠麵傷，循石而上躲炎涼。

巍巍十架雲中木，卻是心安好故鄉。

Narrow daylight entered my room
Shining hours were brief
Winter is over
Summer is near
Are we stronger than we believe?

細細流光入我房，傾心一瞬已成殤！

來年冬盡風還夏，可煉君心韌至昌？

 

Narrow daylight entered my room                   

Shining hours were brief！                             

       摘自加拿大爵士歌手Diana Krall演唱《Narrow Daylight》

Lyrics   Narrow daylight      （舊版）

Narrow daylight entered my room
Shining hours were brief
Winter is over
Summer is near
Are we stronger than we believe?

流光短飛長

細細流光入我房，傾心一瞬短飛長！

一年冬盡風還夏，誰道君身更至剛？

I walked through halls of reputation
Among the infamous too
As the camera clings to the common thread
Beyond all vanity
Into a gaze to shoot you through

風華落寞曆高堂，照影銀光點點藏。

榮虛化作東流水，凝眸一瞬可留香？

Is the kindness we count upon
Hidden in everyone?

青山處處覓柔腸，俠骨豪情幾善良？

I stepped out in a sunlit grove
Although deep down I wished it would rain
Washing away all the sadness and tears
That will never fall so heavily again

獨步疏林落日光，卻尋風雨洗天殤。

一朝暴卷濃愁去，晴空萬裏去愁長。

Is the kindness we count upon
Is hidden in everyone

青山處處覓柔腸，俠骨豪情幾善良？

I stood there in the salt spray air
Felt wind sweeping over my face
I ran up through the rocks to the old
Wooden cross
It's a place where I can find some peace

烈烈鹽風掠麵傷，遍尋石壁躲炎涼。

巍巍十架雲中木，卻是心安好故鄉。

Narrow daylight entered my room
Shining hours were brief
Winter is over
Summer is near
Are we stronger than we believe?

細細流光入我房，傾心一瞬短飛長！

來年冬盡風還夏，誰道君身更至剛？

 

Narrow daylight entered my room                   

Shining hours were brief！                             

       摘自加拿大爵士歌手Diana Krall演唱《Narrow Daylight》

 

 

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